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写结构化议论文

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词汇

  • thesis论文的中心论点
  • argument论点
  • evidence证据/例证
  • counterpoint反方观点
  • conclude总结
  • introduction引言
  • paragraph段落
  • transition过渡词/衔接词
  • develop展开论述
  • support支撑/佐证
  • coherent连贯的
  • persuasive有说服力的
  • outline提纲
  • rhetorical修辞的

议论文的结构

一篇好的英语议论文通常有清晰的三段式结构:引言、正文和结论。本节用中文讲解英语写作。

1. 引言

  • 用开头吸引读者注意
  • 给出主题的总体背景
  • 中心论点(thesis statement):用一两句话表明你的立场

"While technology has transformed modern life, its impact on privacy raises serious concerns."

2. 正文段落(body paragraphs)

每个段落可遵循 PEEL 结构:

  • Point:核心观点
  • Evidence:例子或数据
  • Explanation:说明它如何支撑你的论点
  • Link:过渡到下一段

实用的过渡词

  • 补充:Furthermore, In addition, Moreover
  • 对比:However, On the other hand, Nevertheless
  • 举例:For example, For instance, To illustrate
  • 总结:Therefore, Thus, In conclusion, To sum up

3. 结论

  • 概括关键观点
  • 换一种说法重申中心论点,而不是照抄
  • 延伸到更广的视角或提出问题

不要在学术英语作文开头直接写 "I think..." 或 "In my opinion...";先交代背景。

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表达

  • This essay will argue that...清晰引出文章的中心论点
  • Furthermore, this is supported by...用证据补充一个论点
  • However, critics argue that...委婉引入反方观点
  • In conclusion, it is clear that...开启结论并重申论点
  • To illustrate this point...引入支持观点的具体例子
  • On the other hand,...标示转向相反的观点
  • To sum up引入总结或结论
  • On the one hand... on the other hand呈现论点的两个相反方面

常见错误

  • In my opinion, I think that social media is bad.
    Social media has been shown to have negative effects on...

    学术英语中应避免 'In my opinion, I think' 这样的双重表达。改用更客观、非个人化的说法。

  • This proves that my thesis is right.
    This supports the argument that... / This suggests that...

    'Proves' 在学术语境中过于绝对。用 'supports'、'suggests' 或 'indicates' 保持审慎。

  • In conclusion, I talked about three things.
    In conclusion, this essay has argued that...

    结论不应复述你说过什么,而应简明地重申中心论点及论据。

  • In one hand, this is good; in other hand, it is bad.
    On the one hand, this is good; on the other hand, it is bad.

    固定搭配是 on the one hand... on the other hand。

  • Firstly, I will talk about the environment. Secondly, I will talk about economy.
    Firstly, I will discuss the environment. Secondly, I will discuss the economy.

    正式文章中用 discuss,不用 talk about;economy 前也需要冠词 the。

  • In conclusion, I think that pollution is bad. We should to protect nature.
    In conclusion, I think that pollution is harmful. We should protect nature.

    Should 后接不带 to 的动词原形。bad 过于口语化,harmful 更恰当。

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