Concise Writing
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词汇
- 名詞化nominalization
- 体言止めnoun-ending sentence
- 簡潔なconcise / succinct
- 冗長なverbose / redundant
- 文体writing style
- 省略するomit / abbreviate
- 凝縮するcondense
- 要点key point
- 端的にbriefly / directly
- 削除するdelete / remove
Concise Writing in Japanese
At C1, mastering concise writing techniques is essential for professional and academic Japanese.
名詞化 (meishika) is nominalization: turning verbs into nouns to create denser, more formal sentences. Use こと or の, or sino-Japanese noun forms.
問題を解決する → 問題の解決
Solving the problem → The resolution of the problem
体言止め (taigendome) ends a sentence with a noun instead of a verb, creating a punchy, literary effect common in journalism and poetry.
東京の夜景。美しい光の海。
Tokyo's night view. A beautiful sea of lights.
Both techniques condense information. 名詞化 removes unnecessary verb endings to make writing denser, while 体言止め creates dramatic emphasis. When editing for conciseness, look for 冗長な (verbose) passages and ask: can this verb become a noun? Can the predicate be omitted? Combine with 端的に (briefly) and 要点 (key point) to streamline your writing.
表达
- 問題の解決を図るAim for problem resolution
- 春の訪れ。新たな始まり。The arrival of spring. A new beginning.
- 端的に述べるState briefly
- 要点をまとめるSummarize the key points
- 冗長な表現を避けるAvoid verbose expressions
- 文体を統一するUnify the writing style
常见错误
問題を解決のこと問題の解決Use の between nouns for nominalization, not を...のこと
簡潔い文章簡潔な文章簡潔 is a na-adjective; use な, not い
冗長い表現冗長な表現冗長 is a na-adjective; use な, not い
要点がまとめる要点をまとめるまとめる is transitive; use を for the object 要点
端的で述べる端的に述べる端的 uses に as the adverb form, not で
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